“like the way I would forgive you, if you only ever asked.” That last line lands like a door left slightly open. The whole poem builds with scientific precision depths, seconds, wavelengths, speeds and then arrives at something completely unmeasurable. The structure does exactly what it’s supposed to: it makes the feeling bigger by containing it. This is a rare thing to pull off.
I love this Nadia xx
Thank you so much Hannah xx
Really creative and beautiful
Thank you! That means a lot✨
this is gorgeous writing. i love it so much.
Ahh thank you Morgan,I’m really happy you enjoyed it!
This absolutely pierced my heart. Wow!! You amaze me each time my friend 🌞
Wow, thank you my friend ☀️ Your words mean so much to me. I’m really glad it touched you!
so beautiful
“like the way I would forgive you, if you only ever asked.” That last line lands like a door left slightly open. The whole poem builds with scientific precision depths, seconds, wavelengths, speeds and then arrives at something completely unmeasurable. The structure does exactly what it’s supposed to: it makes the feeling bigger by containing it. This is a rare thing to pull off.