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jennae's avatar

Omg this was the best ending to the series ever!! Your desire setting the sky ablaze. It felt like the perfect culmination of all these beautiful poems. I loveee the image of you climbing the atmosphere with matches in your mouth, that was so powerful. I don't know if I'll look at the burning colours of sunset the same ever again 🌅🧡

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Joscelyne Mei's avatar

a fresh start for everyone i know — the meaning behind that, literally had to exhale. Ponder what it would mean to have a fresh start, I’m thinking big, not just life changing but world changing — if only.

Also found this part particularly interesting

“just wanna write the book of my life on the sky, and spread its ashes in the sea.”

Its rebirth, creation, death but also reads like an incantation, as if you are foretelling your own fairytale, your life spun into words burned and made real through this ritual idk if im making sense? I just recall a practice we did once in yoga teacher training. Where we all wrote our wishes and then burned them, letting them float into the ether as if you tell the universe, the gods, ancestors - now it’s your turn to work your magic, I wash my hands of it.

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